A Legend of Ethshar
In 2005 I conducted an experiment in online serial publication with it, which was more successful than I had anticipated. It brought in much more money than I expected, though still far short of what Tor was paying me for a novel, and it was fun. I repeated the experiment with The Vondish Ambassador in the fall of 2006 and into 2007, then The Unwelcome Warlock (working title The Final Calling) in 2010 and 2011, and I expect to continue with others. These serialized novels will all, if all goes as planned, have ink-on-paper editions from Wildside Press.
The premise of The Spriggan Mirror is simple enough. In With A Single Spell I introduced magical little creatures called spriggans that are created by a magic mirror that's been lost somewhere in the mountains of the Small Kingdoms. As long as the mirror is out there it keeps producing more spriggans, so their numbers are steadily increasing.
Spriggans are drawn to wizardry, and have a habit of getting underfoot at inopportune moments, interrupting spells, knocking over delicate equipment, and otherwise causing trouble.
Eventually, at the urging of Ithanalin and various other people, the Wizards' Guild decides that something must be done about this nuisance. Since Tobas of Telven accidentally created the mirror and is therefore responsible, he and his wives, Karanissa and Alorria, are instructed to deal with the matter.
Tobas knows what the mirror looks like, and roughly where it was last seen -- but that doesn't mean finding it will be easy, even with magical aid, so he hires an expert, a man named Gresh who has made a career of finding things for wizards.
And nobody said that dealing with it once it's found would be easy, either.
The Spriggan Mirror
A Legend of Ethshar
by Lawrence Watt-Evans
resh was yawning, still not entirely awake, when the bell jingled and the just-unlocked door of his shop opened behind him, letting in a swirl of cold air. He blinked once more, flexed his shoulders, and started to turn.
"Don't you ever sleep?" his eldest sister's voice demanded.
Gresh finished his yawn, finished his stretching, finished his turn, and then replied, "Good morning, Dina. I slept well, thank you -- and you?"
"You certainly didn't sleep very much," Dina retorted. She was standing in the doorway, hands on her hips, glaring at him. She wore her wizard's robe, which generally meant she was on business. "I was trying to reach you until at least an hour after midnight. Twilfa didn't know where you were, but wherever you were, you were still awake...."
"And having a lovely time, I might add," he interrupted. He smiled broadly at her, then glanced at the shop curtains he had been about to open and decided not to move them just yet. Dina's presence in her robe often implied a commission, and that might well mean traveling. If it required an immediate departure he would just need to close up shop again. He leaned back against his counter.
"I'm sure you were," Dina said. "Are you planning to see her again, whoever she was, or just add her to the long list of pleasant memories?"
"Well, I don't think you'll be acquiring a new sister-in-law in the immediate future -- but you didn't come here to inquire about my love life, Dina. I take it you were trying to use the Spell of Invaded Dreams to contact me last night?"
"Yes, of course."
"And it always leaves you in a foul temper when a spell doesn't work, even if it's not your fault. I apologize for the inconvenience. What was it you wanted to tell me?"
"I need the blood of an unborn child," Dina replied. "I thought I needed it urgently, since the spell was already started when I discovered I'd run out, but it seems to have dissipated safely after all, since I couldn't find you to get more."
"You didn't check beforehand?" Gresh asked, shocked. "You didn't make sure you had all the ingredients ready? Gods, Dina...!"
"I checked," she protested. "Of course I checked! I had one vial left." She held up two fingers perhaps an inch and a half apart, indicating the size of the vial in question. "Then a spriggan spilled it on the cat."
"Oh." Gresh grimaced as he pushed himself upright and began fishing in his belt-purse for something. "My sympathies. Spriggans do get into everything, don't they?"
"Yes, they do. The little monsters are attracted by magic, you know -- especially wizardry. Locks and spells can't keep them out. I hate the stupid things!"
"I, for one, don't blame you a bit," Gresh said, pulling out the key he had sought. "They're a nuisance, no doubt about it." He turned to look at the magically-sealed iron door of the vault room that young Twilfa could not open unassisted. "How much did you need? And how were you planning to pay?" Then he paused and looked at Dina. "Blood of an unborn child? Was that for the Greater Spell of Transmutation?"
"Yes. Not that it's any of your business." She stepped into the shop, pushing the door partly closed behind her, then crossed her arms over her chest.
"You're sure it dissipated safely? Isn't that a high-order spell?"
"Of course it is," she said, marching forward. "You let me worry about it, Gresh. I'm just here for the blood."
"Yes, well, I have a reputation to maintain..."
"As a supplier of goods and ingredients, not as a confounded babysitter," she said. "I'm ten years older than you and a master wizard; I can take care of myself."
"I don't want anyone thinking I sold you anything that wasn't exactly as described," Gresh protested. "If you turn yourself into a toad, then I don't want a bunch of wizards whispering to each other that it happened because I sold you a bad batch of baby's blood."
"The blood was bad?" a new voice asked, worried, and brother and sister turned to see Twilfa, their youngest sister and Gresh's assistant, emerging from the rear passageway with the freshly filled coal bucket. She set it on the hearth, then looked at Dina. "I thought you said a spriggan spilled it on the cat."
"No, the blood was not bad," Gresh said, with a hint of a growl.
"Is the cat all right?" Twilfa asked, as she transferred coal from the bucket to the grate.
"Is anyone... Are you open?" an unfamiliar voice called from the still partially open front door.
Gresh sighed. "Why don't you two discuss it all while I see to my customer?" he asked, dropping the key back into his purse and heading for the door. "Come in, come in!" he called.
"I can't open the vault!" Twilfa called after him. "I can't open the explosive seal."
"I'll be right back," Gresh told her, as he let in the tall, black-haired woman in a red dress. He did not recognize her, and he was quite sure he would not have forgotten a face like hers.
"The door was open, and I heard voices," the new arrival said uncertainly. She spoke with an odd accent, one that struck Gresh as somehow old-fashioned.
"I was just preparing to open the shop, my dear," Gresh said with a bow. "Do come in." He stepped aside and ushered her into the center of the room.
She obeyed and stood on the lush Sardironese carpet, looking around curiously.
Gresh was aware that Dina and Twilfa were both standing by the iron vault, staring silently at the stranger, but he ignored them. "Now, what can I do for you?" he asked.
The stranger tore her gaze away from the endless shelves of boxes and jars and said, "We want to hire you."
"Hire me?" Gresh smiled indulgently. "I'm afraid I'm not for hire, my lady. I sell wizards' supplies; I don't run errands."
"I'm not a lady," the stranger said. "I'm a witch. We were told that if we wanted something hard to find, something magical, something wizardly, then you were the man to see."
Gresh considered her for a moment.
He had assumed she wasn't a wizard, from her attitude toward him, toward his shop, and toward her own belt-knife; she did not wear her knife quite the way wizards wore their magic daggers, though Gresh could not have explained the difference coherently. Besides, he knew most of the wizards in Ethshar of the Rocks by sight, if not always by name, and he was sure he had never seen her before.
It hadn't occurred to him that she might be some other sort of magician. From her appearance and slightly stilted pronunciation, he had assumed she was just another wealthy ninny, perhaps a princess from the Small Kingdoms, looking for something exotic to impress someone, or trying to hire adventurers for some foolish scheme.
But witches were rarely ninnies -- and for that matter, rarely wealthy. They were also not ordinarily his customers, but perhaps this person had her reasons for coming here. He decided she could indeed be a witch, and telling the exact truth.
"Who is 'we'?" he asked.
"My husband and I. Really, he's the one who wants to hire you, but he's busy with the baby, so I came instead."
The husband was busy with the baby, so the wife was running his errands? The beautiful young wife who claimed to be a witch and whose slim figure showed no evidence of having recently borne a child? Gresh glanced at his sisters. He wanted to hear this explained, but he had his business to attend to. "I do not run errands," he said.
"Fine," the woman said calmly. "Then let me put it this way. My husband is a wizard, and he wants to buy a specific magical item from you."
Gresh could hardly deny that that was exactly his line of business. "Could you wait here for a moment, please?" he said.
He turned and hurried to the vault door, where he fished out the key again, unlocked the lock, then pried a large black wax seal off with a thumbnail, being careful not to mar the rune etched into the wax. He set the seal aside, to be softened over a candle-flame and re-used later, and placed a glass bowl over it to keep it safe from stray fingers. If anyone else touched that seal, anyone but himself, it would explode violently, and Gresh did not particularly want to risk burning down the shop because Twilfa got careless or a customer got curious.
"There," he said, opening the vault. "Twilfa, find her blood for her, would you? I'll help you in a moment. And afterward, I want you to find Tira."
"Tira?" Twilfa looked at the woman in red, then back at her brother. "What do you want her for?"
Gresh glared at her silently for a moment, then turned back to his waiting customer without explaining. Twilfa ought to be able to figure it out for herself, and he did not care to say anything that the customer might overhear. An ordinary person wouldn't have heard a whispered explanation at that distance, but a witch would -- as Twilfa ought to know. Tira, another of their sisters, was a witch, and Twilfa had certainly had plenty of opportunity to observe just how keen Tira's senses were. One witch could always tell another and could also evaluate the other witch's honesty. Tira might be useful in assessing the customer in the red dress.
Twilfa threw one final curious glance at the stranger, then stepped into the vault, Dina close behind.
"Now," Gresh said, returning to the front of the shop, "what was it your husband wanted to buy?"
"A mirror," the witch said. "A very specific mirror, about this big." She held out her hands in a rough circle perhaps five inches in diameter. "He last saw it in the Small Kingdoms, in the mountains near the border between Dwomor and Aigoa."
"The Small Kingdoms." That was more or less the far side of the World, and explained her accent.
"Yes. In or near Dwomor."
"And is this mirror still there?"
"We don't know."
Gresh suppressed a sigh. "My dear, the Small Kingdoms are almost a hundred leagues from here, and my time..."
"We have a flying carpet to take you there," she interrupted. "And we can pay you well."
Gresh blinked. "A flying carpet?" He glanced at the vault; Dina and Twilfa were out of sight behind the iron door.
Flying carpets required high-order magic; not one wizard in twenty could produce one reliably. And a wizard who had one, assuming he had made it himself, could generally find most of the ingredients for his spells without assistance, rather than paying Gresh. Certainly finding a mirror should not be so very difficult for such a wizard.
"What's unique about this mirror?" he asked. "Why do you want me to find it for you?"
The self-proclaimed witch replied, "It's where spriggans come from."
Gresh considered that for a moment. On the face of it, it seemed preposterous -- but then, a great deal of what wizards did was preposterous. She looked calm and sincere, and why in the World would anyone come to him with so absurd a story if it wasn't true?
"Have a seat, my dear," he said, gesturing to the maroon velvet chairs in one corner. "I'll need to hear the whole story, but let me finish with this other customer first."
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When I began writing The Spriggan Mirror, it was under contract to Tor; it was supposed to be their third Ethshar title, after Night of Madness and Ithanalin's Restoration. However, after I'd started writing it, they changed their minds and asked if I would be willing to cancel the contract.
I wasn't thrilled about that, since I had started writing it, but I agreed.
The experiment was a success, I wrote the whole novel, and sure enough, publishers showed up. Not the major New York houses, but publishers.
The novel appeared in the February 2006 issue of the webzine Son and Foe, and was published by Wildside Press in trade paperback as a January 2007 release. (I had previously negotiated a deal with FoxAcre Press, but the Wildside deal has supplanted that. I went with Wildside because they were able to offer more money, better promotion, and the advantage of having most of the Ethshar series in one place; FoxAcre was understanding and released me from our agreement.)
Here are a few more background facts about the novel:
- It was obvious as soon as I wrote With A Single Spell that eventually I would need to deal with the spriggan mirror, but I wasn't in any hurry to do so. Originally this was way down on my list of projects.
- When I let visitors to my webpages vote on which Ethshar novel I should write next, The Spriggan Mirror took an immediate lead and kept it throughout the voting. By the time I sold the proposal and took it off the list of possibilities it had garnered fifty-seven votes, sixteen more than its closest competitor, so I figured I really ought to write it next in the series.
- This meant I needed to come up with an actual story to tell. I had originally assumed that my protagonist would be Tobas of Telven -- but then on a boring flight home from California I found myself devising a new character, who I eventually named Gresh. By the time the plane landed I knew a great deal about Gresh and his eleven (I later added a twelfth) sisters, and his business supplying wizards with hard-to-find ingredients for their spells, and after awhile it all clicked -- this, not Tobas, was the hero of The Spriggan Mirror! As soon as I'd decided that I knew most of the plot.
- The ending I had in mind when I started writing came about as the result of a phone conversation with Kurt Busiek, and chatting with my kids about the project. It was modified significantly by the time I finished the story, though.
- I had a deal with Tor on this, but then sales figures for Night of Madness and Ithanalin's Restoration came in, and were somewhat disappointing -- not bad, but well below what my other Tor titles were selling. Therefore, Tor asked me to shelve the Ethshar series and concentrate on other projects.
- I wrote the first four chapters before the deal fell through, but not much more than that; the real story had hardly even started. When I started the serialization, I honestly didn't think I'd ever need more than those four chapters, but I'm very glad I was wrong.
- I originally estimated that The Spriggan Mirror would run about 100,000 words. It actually only came to 90,000.
And here's one final extra: Covers that never were...
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- Copyright 2005, 2007 by Lawrence Watt Evans.
- First publication was as a reader-supported serial on this website -- see "The Spriggan Experiment".
- First publication of the complete final draft was as the second issue of the webzine Son and Foe.
- Published in trade paperback January 2007 by Wildside Press, ISBN 0-8095-5672-3, or 978-0-8095-5672-4, with cover art by Charles Bernard.
- Published in hardcover April 2007 by Wildside Press, ISBN 0-8095-0046-9.
- Published in mass-market paperback September 2007 by Cosmos Books, ISBN 978-0-8439-5907-9
- Published in e-book form December 2011 by Wildside Press, ISBN 1434403971
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